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Ironman tournament 3 Art; Please give some feedback
Topic Started: Jun 6 2018, 01:31 PM (257 Views)
FinalBoss
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//BeRightBack Splash
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//Starting Soon Splash
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//Main Layout: Preliminaries
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//Main Layout: Finals
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//video of layout/splash in action



Share Link: https://youtu.be/AqFLqXwG1hI
Edited by FinalBoss, Jul 5 2018, 08:44 AM.
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Kaisersan

This might be a bit of a biased opinion as you used the exact color combination that happens to be my favorite, but I find these awesome. The only thing I might change is the very first screen. The "BeRightBack". The splash on the leftmost part is awesome, if you did that completely on your own, kudos! The left part is what I would change a bit. There are so many lines, particles and such going on, that the "BE RIGHT BACK" doesn't immediately catch your eye.
I am no expect in any regard whatsoever of course, but that was the first thing that came to mind as I saw it. Perhaps a bit of blur on the background while the text stays clear or maybe just simply darken that part a bit more than the left part.
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Jun 20 2018, 09:38 AM
This might be a bit of a biased opinion as you used the exact color combination that happens to be my favorite, but I find these awesome. The only thing I might change is the very first screen. The "BeRightBack". The splash on the leftmost part is awesome, if you did that completely on your own, kudos! The left part is what I would change a bit. There are so many lines, particles and such going on, that the "BE RIGHT BACK" doesn't immediately catch your eye.
I am no expect in any regard whatsoever of course, but that was the first thing that came to mind as I saw it. Perhaps a bit of blur on the background while the text stays clear or maybe just simply darken that part a bit more than the left part.
Hey, thanks a lot for the feedback. I'll definitely take note of what you said. I'm thinking about making the text animated, that way it'll stand out more. Thanks again my friend.

Update: Added the layout for the finals
Update 2: Added a video of me working on the layouts/splash, in this video you can see them in action.
Edited by FinalBoss, Jul 5 2018, 08:42 AM.
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